1. The changes I made were just details and making everything flowed smoothly when I was talking so that it wouldn't be choppy, and that I wouldn't have to stop and look at my story because everything would flow.
2. In the content of the story, I just re arranged words so that it sounded better as I'm speaking and also so I do repeat myself. When you write it, it sounds different in your head than when you actually say it aloud.
3. In my delivery, I want to make sure I don't use to many hand motions because I talk with my hands a lot, which isn't too bad because I'm being interactive in a way. Also, I want to make sure that I am clear in my delivery. I tend to mule sometimes where people can't hear me, so I want to make sure I am as clear as possible and go at a steady pace.
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