Editing reflection

After editing my story and reading it over 5 times I changed grammatical and presenting errors. In my paper I changed the tense, edited the simile and made sure that my thoughts were developed and that everything flowed. When I read out loud and recorded my self it was easy to find the errors because not only did they sound awkward when I said them but I was able to actually watch myself speak and see the pace, the clearness of my speech and add emotion to the speech.