Odyssey Story Revisions

My first draft had several issues with poor phrasing and grammar, as well as some unresolved tense issues, and by reading my story aloud I could fix these. There were also sections where I had failed to explain the context of what was happening fully, so reading it aloud helped me to see where the story was congruent and where it needed to be redone. Adding context and fixing phrasing and grammatical issues were the only changes I made to the text, but I also had to change several things in the delivery of my story. I needed to slow down, enunciate, and work on my rhetoric in general.