Odyssey Story Revisions

After reading my story five times aloud, I altered some of the sentences to make it sound better, and I added more to the story. In the content of the story, I changed some of the sentences, so that they would be easier to speak and make the story sound better.  In my delivery, I changed it sound that I ha d varying tones based on the situation I was talking about, so the story would not be monotone and dull.